INSOMNIAC01's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goku Poops]

lol That's basically all of dragonball Z and onward...

[Madness Agmonation]

Ooooookay... PUTTING the character design aside... (assuming its a fad of some kind trying to copy the most honored of all holidays... "Pico Day") Combat is... L ...limited? Yes! Limited...

A. Draw better characters!
Yeah, these weird clock day things are just lazy animation... Its not even funny anymore with that robot paperclip voice...

B.)Make smarter henchmen!!
Henchman CANNOT be that stupid! EVERYONE gave the hero time to act... Even years almost! Jeez... My Old and bed ridden blind deaf dog reacted faster. Making them that stupid is just That's... Thats like giving the audience the fucking finger Mate!

Put your shoes in the henchman #1 on the left at 00:12 seconds... He saw an enemy, AND HAD A SHOT the enemy EVEN HIT THE FUCKING GROUND... from PERFECT COVER!!!
From 0:12 to 0:18...

C.) Make your character realistically vulnerable!
Also... I didn't know you could survive a headshot to the face with a 12 gauge shot gun designed to turn such spoken of face into hamburger meat...
(Yeah at 0:25. That's where the vid should have ended! The rest is his D.M.T. *In Shock Death dream. )

D.) Give characters their own personality!!
IT DOES NOT I repeat... doesn't have to be longer than a resume for a job... It will help you develop the character more and involves the audience now. This can come from a blank extra in the background or your main character! It helps determine intent in the character, like FOR

EXAMPLE! I think the main char you posted here, was probably serious... But kind of a jest while he did it... The way he did things. etc...

E.) Give them purpose!
The fight at 0:33 Wtf?! did you start the fight with nothing but knives then changed the weapon skins to guns later? Are they all drunk? Why do they all stop at the beginning to give the hero time to act? Is that the joke?

Why must we fight?!

F.) Proper introduction's
Speaking of... One thing is their presentation... The characters (all of em) might as well have a narrating introduction with a flashing bass drum that they punch through going " Whats up Doc?" Jesus!
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Everyone stops for a split sec like coming out of a load screen! wtf?!

Look at 0:12 " Both dudes were like " Oh an enemy?! leme just... Take... Take... some... um... some time... and um... M'kay move... over... here... There-THERE!! Now I feel better about movi-*dead* " JUST SHOOT FROM THE FUCKING CORNER ITS YOUR ONLY COVER!! GOD!

I bet he thought he could hit his pressure points...

What am I talking about? lol Look up-

'FIST OF THE NORTH STAR'

RATATATATATATATATATATATATATATTATATATATATAAAAAAAAH! NOW You have seven seconds to live!

Your animation isn't bad, but I see no plot, the fignts don't get me excited cause it feels like im watching someone cut grass... again... like before...

Maybe an actual intro wouldn't be bad... like at 0:10 as the guy lands on the floor, he topples around, cam freezes and his name and quick bio pops up... Camera then returns to normal speed, and he lands on someones neck or something... Have his name pop up in some weird banners for a sec in mid air!

If we cant relate to the main character, he will be indistinguishable from the rest o the background folk, and you could lose your
and you will lose your audience. A.K.A. You are doing good, just... don't stop here... please...

[Five Seven Toss]

I wont be rude, however the quality I am looking for in an animation is something more along the lines of " RicePirate" or " Sexualobster" Hell even "Filmcow" has animation that's about the same level as your own, except he is funny, and is able to bring even the most toddler like drawing/animation to life through voice acting.

The jokes here are probably fresh and funny but... The animation didn't lead me to anything that that caught my interest... Ever seen a stick fight? they seem like they are all the same right? stickdeath.com? yep... same thing happened here to this... I will give credit where its due though, good job animating this! just a shame it was this and not something more... original? different?

ClearSSky responds:

Thanks for the criticism. In the near future i will definitely try to put more thought into my animations. And i'll make sure they are not as dull, and basic as the stick fights you mentioned. I can understand why you might think this animation may not seem that original, but please note that i'm really trying to think of better ideas, and thanks to your pretty good criticisms, it's encouraged me to think even harder.

I'm sorry if this isn't the sort of response you would've been expecting from me, i haven't dealt with criticism a whole lot when it comes to things like this so i'm still learning. I hope you can understand. Thank you.

[LOL Fight Ever]

Wow... It wasn't a clock face bowel movement! Awesome job dude! I like how you left your comfort zone to explore other forms of artistic expression. (even for a second) IT SHOWS GROWTH, Maturity and above all else a tenacity for toilet humor that the Trey parker and mat stone brothers seemed to have seeped away from... Therefore because of this I shall begin to support your cause and achievement by cheering you onward sir!! do not falter for you hold the world on your shoulders! haha!

[PIANOID]

Dude this was pretty funny. You took the concept of jealousy and conflict between the main character and his rabbit, and managed to retell the story in a newer fashion. Before it would be " wo had the better restaurant and each would catch the commercial on T.V. and freak out. Or on the radio if youd go a few years even further back... Now with Social media, its easy and about as fast ( at least it feels that way) Good job retelling the story! Haha

[Dragonpalz]

Animation was smooth, though the characters need to be shaded a little more to give it more depth. Otherwise good comedy, and nice cartoon

[SPACE COCKS]

This... This is good art!! A little like FF7 Chocobo racing level... But with greatness. It's original, in any other sense and the animation was full of things to see! Lol plus it didn't need any kind of story... It all simply explained itself in its own chaotic way.
Good job dude!

[Madness Frankfurterfication]

Comedy is good but... Is this series some kind of bandwagon

[TAKE OUT THE MADNESS]

as far as constructive criticism goes... you need a new format... all your scenes start the exact same... Perhaps adding a bit of variety would make the animation look a lot more professional, Maybe step out of the box and use a story line of some kind..? It would make it cool to neat

[Technical Problems]

Good job dude!