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[Dr. Zach Hadel]

animation is good... otherwise its a weird talk show kind of thing.... eh

[Goofy's Confession - A Christmas Tale]

I gave you all the stars because of his death OOOOOHOHOHOHOOOOYYY!! rotflmao

[If Yu-Gi-Oh! was made by EA]

Its similar to speedosauseage cause... theres... not much else to do here. its a game about enslaving card monsters... pokemon wanabe... like digimon... its like pokemon but not really cause... ITS ONLINE...

[The Spongebob Squarepants Anime - OP 1]

Um... Hmmm.... Well.... Um... Hmmm... ...a.....hmmm.... What?! very accurate. The plot is merely the sidequest . Forgot the Naruto short pants. Not quite shorts or pants... On Patrick

[Vineyard Institute: No Evil 026]

Duuuuuuuuude, not to crowd on your style but you should really humanize your voices more-this series is pretty cool. Might I suggest not trying too hard to give a voice an accent? Let the voice be as natural as possible, so it sounds more authentic... (I dont mean the indigenous accent, I mean more the attempt at sounding older or bigger through voice, like trying to imitate your dad or something.) Hire an older actor if possible, have him speak like he speaks to a friend.

On another note? The acting... Maybe try standing up while you talk? It will let your voice fall through more, Then you'll actually display honest feelings rather than fake them. They'll sound like they are genuinely displaying that urgency in the tone of voice that should be there but isn't. (Your characters are a tad bit monotone.)

And finally the voices don't blend with their backgrounds, they all sound like they are in an office. Even when the dude's outside.
(I know this sounds silly) If I may suggest, if you want to start a scene at the end of a running sprint, or at the end of a walk across town, before recording, actually do some jumping jacks until you are ACTUALLY out of breath, animate it in, (the character breathing heavily, not the jumping jacks.) even if its a quick gesture.

Just... don't get so out of breath that you can only spit out a word every 3 seconds between breaths. Just do it enough to get that tone of voice.

Experiment and see what works, Once you do that, the different tones or moods of the voices you act, will sound genuine.
( like being scared or preoccupied, angry, out of breath and annoyed, out of breath and happy, tired, sleepy, scared, terrified worried, concerned, vengeful or vindictive grudges, desperation, loss, despair victories-etc.) And they'll come out more naturally.

Otherwise dude good job maen you rock :3

[Razor Blades]

Did... Did she just say " Billy slashed up his classmates using razor blades?" Jesus... Classic Mis-direction using those tattoes, I see what you did there.

[Splaturry 2]

I can smell the fish from here... raw and deliciously wrapped in rice and seaweed yum!

[Purgatory Dreams - Choking on Plastic]

I got to agree with Derpnyan... the ending humanized the villains too much... making the feeling of being in a strange place disappear. Also, Main character's ability to not feel fear (HerSass) is indeed what killed it... Its true, Think about it. If she wasn't scared of the game-demon dude? then why should I?
Good job tho. P.S. The talking demon would have been better if he talked less... like.. a lot less... The monologing humanized him further... kind of reminds me of a poor lonely pawn shop owner angry at life so he hates happy people.

ClockworkPixel responds:

yeah it's something to work on. my intensions were that tiff acts cocky like she so doesn't care only for it to bite her in the ass like a "haha faker you are scared!!" but it may not of came across that way. doesnt matter, onwards and upwards as we learn

[Cream]

I totally get it. Its basically... if we found something that could cure everything, the greed from people would reject it. Like Diabetes Cures... They probably already exist but it would be horribly inconvenient for the massive corporations making insulin and medications for diabetics to suddenly... stop... because they don't need to produce anyting anymore... billions of people would lose their jobs. We have become slaves to our own power... and we will never let it go... because its all we have... so yes... that would be pretty close. Love the vid. Smart... I see what you did there. lol

[Lloyd: Episode 5]

The context... its golden... Let me get this straight... Lloyd was mistakenly murdered by Chloes evil obsessive dating attempt, mistaken for Chloe, and was killed so unfairly that Unicorn Pegasus god gave Lloyd the body of Chevy Chase to solve his own murder, explain to his girlfriend why he had someone else's body, and got killed by said same murder after discovering how or why he was murdered. and got his body back to come back and explain everything to his girlfriend again. Who dumped him after having a religious epiphany on reality regarding god as being a unicorn and her sexual fantasies being horribly disfigured and ruined by the sole greasy and disgruntled old face of CHevy Chase?

Not bad...

Not bad...