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Eeeeeeeeeh Animation wasn't in sync with the voices. It felt a little forced... Work on Voice acting a little more and you could transform anything you talk to or into

Lol this was exactly what you were trying to do. I like how you didn't get lost in your point and managed to spoof God of War Love the Troll style of the animation lol

Duyde... Your animation is smooth and you take time to visually explain shit... in an easy to understand way that is fast and helps keep you in pace with the story. And the expressions plus imagery in the clip shows exactly what their intentions are without the need for dialogue Like when the robot was trying to remove the VR helmet, you already knew why it was doing that and what happened. And what the character was trying to do, how it felt about it, and the effects of the event. Good job! Many should learn from you!

You could call me evil but its really funny to read your comment on this with Film Cow's voice.

Quality is good but I don't know what hes doing, why hes doing it, why hes there where he is his reason for suddenly bringing cubes out of nowhere into existence. why he can do that? did the cubes crush? or slice their oponents? Is the tentacle on his side? alone? why is it there? and why is it mirroring its movement? Basically a big WTF dude its just a clusterfuck.

So... Why is he powerful? I cringed at the fact that I do know what Im watching. Do I go back to your old movies? Is it even worth going? like is there a story? is this a Trollified rick rollin g good time?
If I was watching random violence id at least put restraints on my powerful characters so it wouldn't be so boring to watch. "Oh a magical convenient barely an inconvenience Deuis ex machina will solve this impossible wtf"

I honestly think the animation is OKAY for an 8-bit style game, it needs work with the audio but all in all its cool. Problem is... Your intro message killed it for me.
Both Good, and bad artists post their stuff here for it to get viewed by people. Where you have the freedom to say "Hey this is cool" or "Hey this sucks". If your stuff is good enough to get noticed.
My problem is you basically posted to hold off on our coments or you will ban and block us? For what? Voicing an opinion? You will never be better until you accept your mistakes and flaws, but you will never know you have any mistakes or flaws if you do not listen... How will you ever improve otherwise? Just to show you that through all your hard work, your intro message ruined your film... lol It was good though...

I know what the voice acting should say in fact ill follow it.
Kid:*walk thru forest * Im fucking hungry *spots prey to eat* OH FOOD !!
Girl: No food for you cause Im a bad mother!
Kid: Dude my food!
Mom: Fu starve to deaf!
Kid: *sigh* lets walk away and be good.
*snek attacks*
Mom: Oh No Snek Ill kill animals now!!
Kid: WTF NO FOOD BY THE FIRE BUT I HAS BACKGROUND DREAMS for exposition to myself!
*wakes up*
Mom: Look you don't need food, just drink wate- OH NOES THAT PIGGY AGAIN IT WANTS REVAAAAANGEH!!
MAGIC WAND, MAKE MY GALDAR GROOOOOOOOW!!! Fwoooooossshhhhhhhhhh *Go go power rangers transform*
Mom: Oh okay kill it now.
Kid: I need backu
Mom: Byyyyyyyyeeeeeeeee
Monster:Dies* Blerg!
Kid: Ima kill that monster more now!
Ooooooh it was a moooooo-
THE END!

................................................................. What?!

He says.... "......I can't read ANALOG clocks."

really cool, like the animation. though it needs a bit of narration and to find that perfect voice...

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